Infinite Circle – a 100w story

This story is written in response to the photo prompt (below) for Friday Fictioneers, the finest flash fiction group on the web.

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Infinite Circle

Childhood sweethearts. That’s what people call us.

Adam and I sat together at school, walked home together.

We even had the same friends, though nowadays Margaret works for a London marketing company and Paul manages a five-star hotel in Singapore.

Adam inherited his father’s building firm, so he couldn’t leave. I planned on going to university. But Adam said he loved me so much he couldn’t bear for me to move away.

He’s still as charming as ever. In public.

And I still smile. In public.

Childhood sweethearts. That’s what people call us.

Was there ever a time when I could have walked away?

©Siobhán McNamara

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44 Responses to Infinite Circle – a 100w story

  1. neilmacdon says:

    Beautifully understated

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  2. Dear Siobhán,

    Subtle, yet oh so very powerful.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. James says:

    She probably still could but it would be harder. She should have gone to university.

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  4. Iain Kelly says:

    I’m sure there are many who reach this point in life. Nicely expressed.

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  5. pennygadd51 says:

    Subtly written. You roll up the storm clouds almost unnoticed, and catch us in a deluge of icy rain. What a bleak conclusion.

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  6. Trapped. Ther are such bleak undertones in your words. Excellent.

    Click to read my FriFic!

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  7. Cleverly done and very sad too.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  8. Sandra says:

    Subtle and layered. Loved the voice.

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  9. I’m an optimist. If people still call them sweethearts they can’t be fighting like cats and dogs, so maybe there’s still hope to kindle a new blaze in the old fireplace.

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  10. Woah! What a powerful ending. Absolutely loved it.

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  11. draliman says:

    Sweethearts to all, but who knows what goes on behind closed doors? Nice one!

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  12. yarnspinnerr says:

    The reader is enticed with the story not told here. Excellent as always.

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  13. granonine says:

    Oh, please–walk away RIGHT NOW!

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  14. The keeping up of appearance is the worst thing really… Big sunglasses is a clear sign… hope she can leave still

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  15. Dale says:

    Living a pretend life… how terribly sad.

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  16. tedstrutz says:

    The time is now. Nice story, I liked the way you slyly led into the truth.

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  17. Dan Bohn says:

    Mixed emotions here. This is a heart breaker story Siobhan.

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  18. Wow. That hits hard. Well done. :o)

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  19. This is so very well done. Have you been gone for awhile? Or have I just missed your posts? Thanks for the heartache of this ~ I meant that.

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  20. plaridel says:

    she could walk away if she wants to. who knows? he maybe thinking about the same thing.

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  21. Yup, that’s how it happens. You described this chillingly well.

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