Day four of the NaPoWriMo challenge is to write either a love poem or a break-up poem without the clichés.
See the National Poetry Writing Month Facebook page or www.napowrimo.com for more on this challenge.
Saving the olive tree
You took the olive branch
I gave you
and used it as a stick with which
to beat yourself
You tell anyone who cares to listen
that I hate you.
Leaving would be so much easier
if only that were true.
©Siobhán McNamara
You’ve managed to capture a very complex relationship in so few words. Wonderfully done.
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Agree w/ k rawson. My hat’s off.
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